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The Art of a Meaningful Email: Real-Life Example

I’m going to guess that when you think of email you don’t think positively about it. It’s regarded as one of those necessary evils of the modern worker. You want to sort through and be done with it. People declare inbox bankruptcy and celebrate inbox zero. Email is something to conquer and short, rapid responses tend to be method for victory.

But what if you didn’t see it like that…at least not all the time? What would it take for someone to be so impacted by an email you wrote that she would want to print it out and post it in her cube?

Or consider this: is it possible to construct an email that you get what you want with no questions asked? It is. I’ve done it and you can too.

You Can’t Buy Their Hearts

I’ll never forget the time I sent an email to the PR team that was working with a client of mine. My client and I had just completed a day of planning with our new PR agency for a product launch. The problem was that the PR firm was a big, national agency and my client was a small company with a small budget. My client and I were both concerned that the agency would be excited for the first few weeks but then move us to the back burner and move on to bigger, more substantial clientele. We didn’t have the budget to buy their time so we needed to earn their hearts. I sent them an email with that goal. Here’s what I wrote them:

Subject: Reflections on yesterday

PR Team:

The 1996 film, Jerry Maguire, added three statements to the American conversation. These are still around today and likely aren’t going anywhere soon:

1. Show me the money.
2. You complete me.
3. You had me at hello.

What you guys probably don’t realize is that you had us at hello. From the first time I spoke to James on the phone I was almost certain we would work with you guys. I hadn’t even completed all the initial agency interview calls yet, but I had this sense in my gut that you were the one. Then, after a follow up call when our team we spoke with Vicky, we all said, “I really like them. They’re it.” I agreed, but the process was not over, so we continued. A few weeks ago our VP joined us as we spoke to your team along with two other agencies to make our final decision and it was immediately clear. You were the one. There wasn’t really much of a discussion. It was that clear of a choice. So while the process seemed all professional and stuff, I was thinking last night about how you guys had us at hello and you should know that.

Our expectations for you were high coming into the meeting yesterday. On a scale of 1 to 10 (10 being the highest), we felt like the meeting would be at least a 9 and likely a 10. Now, having completed our initial meeting together, I think it’s fair to say you guys were somewhere around 100 on that same scale of 1-10. So yes, our expectations were high and you greatly exceeded them. Your agency is not only the right fit for us but this team of Vicky, Noah, Christy, Nicholas, Maddy and Paige is perfect for us too. So while it would be premature to say “you complete me” in this relationship, we like the direction it’s going.

Of course at the end of the day we want to take our little brand and show it the money. This time last year this company was a hope and a dream that was about to launch. Today we’re having conversations with major tech companies about mutually beneficial relationships and we stand on the edge of a product launch that we hope will propel our brand awareness and sales into the stratosphere. We want to be ridiculously and unapologetically successful but do so in such a way that we all keep our dignity. Obtaining success with honor is more rare than it should be but it’s possible. You guys share that philosophy which, again, is why you’re right for us.

So, while I could have just said, “Good meeting yesterday. We’re excited to be working with you,” it seems to me you guys deserve something with a little more thoughtfulness…hence this email.

Whether you’re a Jerry Maguire fan or not doesn’t really matter but I like what we have here and Jerry seemed to provide an appropriate backdrop to these thoughts. Thanks for being great hosts yesterday. Let’s roll.

And that was it. We found out later that day that several people on the team printed the email and that one person started crying. James, the agency president, said it was one of the best emails he had ever received.

Here’s the thing, I meant everything in that email. I wasn’t trying to manipulate them but I did want to earn their hearts for the project and it worked.

Over the next several months we saw the PR team give our little brand their heart and soul. The vice president, Vicky, even admitted secretly that they spent more time on our project than the budget allowed but they were so committed to our success they just had to do it. We had their hearts on the project and that was all we could ask for.

5 Keys To A Meaningful Email

You can draft a meaningful email too. Start with these five elements:

1. Be Sincere: If you don’t mean what you say they’ll know it. Insincerity is hard to cover up. Sincerity is hard to fake.

2. Be Personable: Speak in first person and infuse the email with your own personality.

3. Be Vulnerable: Speak plainly and don’t hold back on your fears, concerns, excitement or any other feelings. You’re writing emotionally to connect emotionally.

4. Be Clear: Make sure your intentions are obvious and your reason for sending the email is abundantly clear to everyone who reads it.

5. Be Candid: Say it like you would say it if you were talking to them. Address the difficulty or admit that the email is unusual for you. Put your guard down if you want them to put theirs down.

Email is just another way to communicate the written word. Sure, it’s usually for information or data, but what if it actually moved someone. Put some heart into that next significant email and see what happens if you attempt something more meaningful.

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Bill Seaver founded MicroExplosion Media in fall 2007 and has been blogging since June 2006. Bill has consulted numerous organizations to help them understand and apply social media into their marketing initiatives. He's led seminars, corporate training sessions, and numerous social media campaigns to include blog strategy and development, Google AdWords, podcasts, online video strategy, widget development, social media marketing campaigns, blogger networks, and social networking campaigns.